Teacher Thursday
Fiction writing Writing tips
Let’s talk about SETTING.
Setting is not simply the backdrop of the story. It’s the context within which the pursuit unfolds. is journey encompasses both space and time. When you conceptualize your story, don’t just think about its location. Remember that it travels through the unfolding fabric of time. Whether or not you use a timestamp, it’s vital to orient your readers to the setting early in your story.
Character is the who. Pursuit is the what. Intention is the why. Plot is the how. Setting is both the where and the when.
Take a look at your story.
FINE-TUNING MY MANUSCRIPT
- Is it clear where and when this story is taking place? What incorrect assumptions might readers make regarding this setting or genre? How can I address or quell them early on?
- How can I better show the impact that this setting has on the characters? How will it affect their goals and the way they try to accomplish them?
- Is the setting integral to this story? If not, how can I make the time and location more vital to the character’s and the story’s development?
- What potential assets does this setting provide that will facilitate the protagonist’s pursuit? Can I organically weave them into better integrate the setting with each scene?
- What attributes of this setting will hinder the protagonist in the pursuit of his goal? How can I better utilize the uniqueness of this setting to create more obstacles to his success?
- Have I used vivid details to create an impression rather than just describe a location? How can I use more evocative language (while remaining in this voice and point of view) to generate readers’ empathy and emotion rather than just visual images in their minds?
Let us know how these lessons are helping your writing.
Have questions for Steven? He’ll be answering all of these and more while workshopping with you at our retreat and seminar in Ecuador next April.
